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Waseem Cheema
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0 posted 2001-06-23 04:05 AM


yah kasa tari muhabat ka dustoor howa
What the rule of your love is
Tari muhabat may tuj say main dooer howa
I went away from you in your love

Buhat chaha taray qareeb rahnay ko magur
I desired so much to live near you, but
Wo hi howa jo maray rub ko munzoor howa
Its happened only that my God admitted

Muhabat main tum say judae panay k bad
After having a separation from you in love
Ghray zukhmoon say to main bi choor howa
I too become full of deep wounds

Naheen phoochtay tum say baywafae ka sabub magur
I am not asking about the reason of faithlessness
Ittna to batao k muj say kiya kasoor howa
Just tell me what is my fault

Dunya main wohi kuch pa suko gay Waseem
You will get only those things in this world Waseem
Iss zindgi main jo tara muqdoor howa
Which are in your fate of this life


                       ~Wasi~

I love to nice poetry.

© Copyright 2001 Wasee Ashraf Cheema - All Rights Reserved
helen smith
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1 posted 2001-06-23 05:57 AM


so true waseem   and so nice
Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-06-23 08:36 AM


Waseem, I know I do not pronounce your language correctly, but the thought of your speech, then reading it in English, does leave a lovely echo in one's mind....

and the last stanza?  Awesome!

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