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Sudhir Iyer
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0 posted 2001-06-22 10:05 AM


Beautiful is
the one who shines
in an everlasting smile,
with a brightness
that clothes naked eyes
like sight to the blind.

Beautiful is
free and flying
towards the blue,
with wings marked
by joytipped rays
of candid happiness.

Beautiful is
the one who flows
like a brook to the sea,
along the dancing reeds
swaying with the winds
staying alive in belief.

Beautiful is
a wonderful poetess
with dignified grace,
a charming persona,
and much more...

Ah! To be beautiful is
to be our friend, Liz!!!

  


[This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 06-22-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Sudhir Iyer - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2001-06-22 10:08 AM


and I am sure LIz will greatly appreciate this... nice work..

might check this line..

stayin alive in belief.

was meant to be staying?

Always a pleasure to read your words!

Sudhir Iyer
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2 posted 2001-06-22 10:13 AM


Cpat,
Thanks for pointing the typo... Oh how I dislike these little bugs...

Liz has been writing so many beautiful and inspiring poems, that I absolutely felt I had to write something... and I hope I did an okay job...

Regards,
sudhir

"I was born intelligent - education ruined me"

[This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 06-22-2001).]

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3 posted 2001-06-22 10:20 AM


you did a wonderful job Sudhir..
wonderful indeed!

Fancy
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4 posted 2001-06-22 01:50 PM


...I adore your use of the "dictionary of your heart" to express such a true and accurate description of beautiful!!
Fancy

Elizabeth Santos
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5 posted 2001-06-22 02:53 PM


Sudhir,
You have no idea how much this poem means to me. It is such a beautiful poem, and I will cherish it always. It comes to me at a time when I needed someone to recognize the happiness of my spirit, at a time when deception has caused me so much distress in the last few months. But when I write it's the joy people see, and not the tears. You have written an exquisite rose and gently placed it in my hand, and I thank you with all my heart, dear poet of India.
Liz

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6 posted 2001-06-22 03:35 PM


Sudhir, it even smells sweetly....a loving tribute to a wonderful Lady....
Watersign6
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7 posted 2001-06-22 03:41 PM


love this one,you have written a wonderful tribute to a amazing poet  
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2001-06-22 04:35 PM


Sudhir,
She is a wonderful lady and deserves a rose.

Irish Rose
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9 posted 2001-06-22 07:36 PM


she certainly is and you've written a beautiful tribute to her!

"This rose has seen red, I have been blue
I'm going to Ireland in 2002!" Kathleen.

Titia Geertman
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10 posted 2001-06-22 07:43 PM



    

Just beautiful

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

Logan
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11 posted 2001-06-22 07:53 PM


Marvelous and so well said tribute, my friend..gentle smile
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12 posted 2001-06-22 11:58 PM


Leave it to you, Sudhir, to recognize beauty of spirit where it exists....you are that kind of man. A beautiful tribute to a beautiful poet and lady...
Severn
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13 posted 2001-06-23 12:05 PM


Wonderful...Lizzy deserves this...

well done Suddy...

K

Janet Marie
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14 posted 2001-06-23 02:36 AM


yes...Grace has always been a word that comes to mind when thinking of Liz...
kind and sincere tribute to one of Passions most gifted poets...
she inspires us all and not just in poetry but how to live in grace as well.
and Sud..your lights shining here too  

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15 posted 2001-06-23 11:39 AM


You've captured her essence, Sudhir, with your beautiful words! Very lovely!
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16 posted 2001-06-23 11:42 AM


Beautiful and deserved tribute to "one of the family."
Well done.

Sudhir Iyer
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17 posted 2001-06-25 10:12 AM


My good friends,

I am extremely thankful for all your kind words...

Many thanks to you Liz, for being the epitome of beautiful ... This place is Magic and you are one of the special phenomenons here...

I am glad I could put words to what I felt...

Regards to all,
Sudhir

"I was born intelligent - education ruined me"

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