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VAS
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0 posted 2001-06-22 09:38 AM


Ah, Yessssssssssss...
Virginia Salter

An apple a day
keeps the doctor away
unless
you're Snow White...

then
you must await
your very own
Prince Charming

to kiss the poison
from your lips
and give rise
to your heart
your soul
your true self

and give to you
your overcoming

© June 22, 2001

© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-22 09:40 AM


nice poem VAS... but...do any of us need another to bring us to life? Or is that our job..no matter how hard??

Enjoyed the read...just went off on a tangent of my own when I read it...sorry

VAS
Member Rara Avis
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2 posted 2001-06-22 09:43 AM


Only if you're Snow White and the poison from a woman scorned has placed you into a state of stasis.  

Thanks for reading!

Lady In White
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3 posted 2001-06-22 01:59 PM


Ah...people scurrying to dictionaries to look up stasis...

I do enjoy when poets make the mind work...

fortunately, I did not have to break open Webster...

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2001-06-22 04:25 PM


VAS,
Very nice thank you and I did enjoy.

Titia Geertman
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Netherlands
5 posted 2001-06-22 07:50 PM


Ahhh VAS, you gave me a smile on my face tonight with this sweety.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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Logan
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6 posted 2001-06-22 08:06 PM


VAS, gentle smile, don't we all need our Prince or Princess Charming, if only in our dreams? Well done, Princess
wayoutwalt
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7 posted 2001-06-24 01:22 AM


wow my fave o yours for sure. so clever!
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