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AniKay83
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0 posted 2001-06-22 12:12 PM


today is my birthday
and you said a few words
really just blew it off
while everyone else sang songs
gave gifts, hugs, and kisses
i went home and looked at the present
i had bought for your birthday
eight months in advance
because it was perfect
for a perfect person like you
i thought how every day
i struggled not to give it to you
almost unable to contain my excitement
just as i hadn't been able to before
which is why i bought it in the first place
tomorrow your birthday will come
and i will say a few words
really just blow it off
while everyone else celebrates
         your day
and i'll think of the present
i had bought for your birthday
eight months in advance
collecting dust and
waiting for the year
an imperfect person like you
deserves perfect love


~*Today is my 18th birthday!!! Yeah me!!!(Actually I had a pretty good one!)*~

I'm the answer to a question no one asked a sleepless dreamer, destroyed by passion

~Angela Pizza

© Copyright 2001 Christine Straka - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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1 posted 2001-06-22 12:15 PM


Ani Happy B Day.

You can do lotta things at 18 yuh more freedom less responsibility. Great way to get it started with a poem!

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2 posted 2001-06-22 04:59 AM


Well Happy Birthday!  And if someone "blew off your birthday", that really hurts, so I think you have to tell them how it made you feel so you loose any toxic feelings, and are able to enjoy a wonderful birthday memory.  I enjoyed your poem.

~*~ Tell someone you love them today, as tomorrow may never come ~*~

Waseem Cheema
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3 posted 2001-06-22 06:56 AM


     HAPPY BIRTHDAY ANI    
  

Watersign6
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4 posted 2001-06-22 07:03 AM


     Happy Birthday to you and that poem was good although I am sorry that someone blew it off
I agree with Mysteria you should tell the person how it made you feel.

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5 posted 2001-06-22 09:49 AM


Happy Birthday, and you might as well start now, letting go of people that don't appreciate you. Or you will still be trying when you have my birthday, which is so many more years.
Have fun all year at least. This is a big b-day.
Sandra

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6 posted 2001-06-22 09:59 AM


Happy Birthday!!!

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7 posted 2001-06-22 12:01 PM


Yes happy birthday!!! (The 21st or the 22nd? Let me know so I can add you to the list!)  
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8 posted 2001-06-22 12:13 PM


Happy Birthday!
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9 posted 2001-06-22 12:38 PM



  
  

Where are the goodies???? Watch out, here we come....

Happy birthday to you Anikay

Titia

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AniKay83
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10 posted 2001-06-22 02:32 PM


Thanks everyone for all the Happy Birthday wishes and great pics and smilies!!!! (It was the 21st) Thanks for reading!

Much love all,
   Krissie

I'm the answer to a question no one asked a sleepless dreamer, destroyed by passion

~Angela Pizza

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11 posted 2001-06-22 08:50 PM


Ani,
    Happy Birthday! And I can relate to how deeply it stings when you take the care and time for that special "one", and the special "one" does not return the same loving gesture.  You have so many journeys ahead of you, follow new roads and enjoy being 21. Ah, if only I could go back...
           Elise

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12 posted 2001-06-22 09:01 PM


Wow, this was a very good piece with a powerful message inside.  Wonderful write!

I hope you had a very Happy Birthday!!  

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by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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13 posted 2001-06-22 09:09 PM


Its my birthday as well. (well, in a few days actually). Happy B-Day though.    

*+*Would you be known by everybody? Then you know nobody.~
-Publilus Syrus*+*

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14 posted 2001-06-22 09:17 PM


Happy 18th birthday to you!!  I know how it hurts for someone you really like to not remember your special day.  When you get as old as me you get alot of surprise parties because no one knows if you will still be here on your birthday!  Like your poem and hope you like it here with us at PIP.  ME
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15 posted 2001-06-23 07:08 PM


Hey Krissie, it's great to have you back. . . Happy Birthday and remember, it's always what you do with the candles. . .  

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