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thecraig
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0 posted 2001-06-21 04:10 PM



Raindrops from a cloudy sky,
tell then that the heavens need to cry;

Say then fast upon the earth with splash,
how upset gathering mists & why?;

Sad on lamenting souls hells fire
trying to right a wrong with tears
bring those tortured spirits higher;

Dampening heat to bring new life
bursting rations flowered through strife;
nourished passions meander rife,
soaking metals hard & heating
tightening condensing fitting seating.
bursting rumbles a raging roar
Where then there shall the Spirits soar,
Pull attracts on Heavens law.
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1 posted 2001-06-21 05:04 PM


beautifully done!  
Irish Rose
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2 posted 2001-06-21 07:41 PM


sounds like a good time to roast marshmallows!

"This rose has seen red, I have been blue
I'm going to Ireland in 2002!" Kathleen.

[This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 06-21-2001).]

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