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MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

0 posted 2001-06-14 05:14 PM







~~~To Enchant my Melody~~~






Today
I stood on that shore
That far
Fantastical shore
Where they say
Life starts to twinkle
~~~
Where all drops of dews
Gather
To wash this world
With the new dawn
To give it a glittering
Soft existence
Even if it didn’t last long
~~~
Where all words
Stand
Fighting to make
The perfect utterance
That could embrace
All this contradiction
All this magnitude
Of love and hate
Of longing
Wanting
Yet fighting
All of life
~~~
Yes……
I stood there
Silently
Though all voices
Seemed to rage inside of me
All utterances
Seem to fight to get a way
To catch
To draw
This magical image
~~~
And with every dancing tide
Every lofty performance
Of that enchanting shore
Every silencing echo
Of voices
Of sounds
And of music
Yes…..music
Music of voices
Mingling
As if in a soft embrace
Tickling all the senses
As they dance in harmony
To form this background
Of breathtaking colors
And voices
~~~
Shhhhhhh……
But where was my voice
Lost
Gained
Or just left me
……..
Alone
To join that miraculous
Music
~~~
The soft titling
Breeze
Took every single breath
I had at that moment
Took them away
Telling me that
is its way
To hush all sounds in me
To delicately kiss
The bewildered
Bewitched
And forever enchanted
Melody
In me….
~~~
And so
Silenced
Breath taken
And forever
Enchanted
I stood there
Waiting
For the dawn
To come
Again
To enchant
My melody
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Thank you



It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2001-06-14 05:19 PM


Quite lovely!
Sven
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2 posted 2001-06-14 09:30 PM


now this flows just like the picture that you have shown with it. . . it's a remarkable piece of work, well written and wonderfully delicate. . .

excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Honeybee
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3 posted 2001-06-14 09:36 PM



What a magical way with words you have!  I truly enjoyed this, what a beautiful moment you paint!  Into my library this goes!

Take care,
Melissa~

2dalimit
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4 posted 2001-06-15 06:14 AM


WOW!!

This is great write. Thanks for sharing one of your enchanting moments.

Melton

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5 posted 2001-06-15 07:34 AM


a lovely picture painted here
and to all that read it should bring cheer


MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
6 posted 2001-06-15 07:45 PM





Dear Sunshine.......

How could I thank you for always encouraging me..........

Thank you dearest  
*********************

Sven......

That you have liked this one, truly delights my heart...........

Thank you dearly
********************

Melissa

I'm really glad that you loved it......and even more glad that it would be in your library.....

Thank you......and take care you too  
*********************

Sir, Melton...........

I must thank you for sharing me my enchanting moment

**********************

Cpat hair.......

Thank you dearly......

******************************

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

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