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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2001-06-12 10:35 PM


Wind Chimes
Virginia Salter

I have two lovely wind chimes
out on the patio
they’ve been doin’ the samba
more hours than I can know

a hangin’ from the gazebo
a portable one, at best
it goes a dancin’ in the wind
sometimes it’s just a pest

my neighbor tied it down real well
about a year ago
with heavy cord, the nylon kind,
it does a right good show

in times past, it would waltz the lawn
a headin’ for the fence
an’ my neighbor’d come a runnin’
I’m sure in self defense

with his lovely work, his helping hand,
above, beyond the call
I now can trust the thing to stay
right by my northern wall

otherwise I’d not trust
to hang my chimes on there
‘cuz they’d likely go a flyin’
with it into the air

yet, since it stays, they dance and sing
a musical, lyrical song
and when I try to take a nap
they vocalize out strong

the moral of the story
is some where in my head
where the echoing, ‘reverbering’
is leaving pain instead

© June 14,  2000

© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Logan
Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641
Arkansas
1 posted 2001-06-12 10:38 PM


Ahhh, VAS, I have to come to the defense of the poor things, as they really are lovely, except when they bother me...enjoyed with a big smile...gentle smile
VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
2 posted 2001-06-12 10:43 PM


Yep, I do too!!!  I always pick the ones with beautiful voices, too.  The one I had with the prettiest voice ever, was liked by someone else, too.  It was stolen.

Now, I hang them in the BACK yard. :O}  fool me twice, shame on me.. you know.

[This message has been edited by VAS (edited 06-13-2001).]

Poeminister
Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada
3 posted 2001-06-13 11:24 PM


Excellent.  I like wind chimes almost all voices. They're always enchanting to hear...nicely done.

[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 06-13-2001).]

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