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FrankBH
Junior Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 10
Florida

0 posted 2001-06-12 07:00 PM


Ask Your Heart

All those questions you have before you.
So much doubt faces you daily.
Not knowing if you are doing the right thing.
And now you are afraid of making the wrong decision.

I wish I had the answers you need my friend.
You are so confused and I can't do a thing to help.
Maybe it's time you looked inside those feelings.
Perhaps the moment has come to ask your heart.

How many have settled for leisure and being in like?
While secretly wondering if they would ever find love.
Do you look forward to another day with him?
Or would you rather spend all of today with the other?

These are answers you really need to find out.
But first you need to ask yourself the right questions.
Your life should reflect the love I know you have.
I hope you don't let that love wither and die.

Whatever you decide, I will always be your friend.
And I hope you always remember that.
I have tried to help as much as a friend would dare.
And now it's time for you to ask your heart.


©2001FrankB.Holcomb


© Copyright 2001 Frank B. Holcomb - All Rights Reserved
Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
1 posted 2001-06-12 07:44 PM


Excellent advice, Frank.  Welcome to Passions!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Watersign6
Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823
Hurricane,WV
2 posted 2001-06-12 08:15 PM


welcome and wow good starting poem  
FrankBH
Junior Member
since 2001-03-08
Posts 10
Florida
3 posted 2001-06-12 08:25 PM


Hi and thank you for the very warm welcome and the kind comment on my poem also.
snowpants
Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061
KS
4 posted 2001-06-12 09:21 PM


Wonderful write, Frank...thanks for sharing the advice...welcome to Passions!

sp  

I hopelessly, helplessly, wonder why
Everything gotta change around me
I’d tell it to your face,
But you lost your face along the way...

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