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Open Poetry #14

Fish at Your Own Peril

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

0 posted 2001-06-12 09:26 AM

rock like vertebrae
protrude from shallow water
fish at your peril

"I am not now that which I have been."

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2001-06-12 09:29 AM

shallow, rocky stream
cold, fast mountain-fed water
rainbow trout abound

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-06-12 09:29 AM

ah nice imagery and a nice message enjoyed this..

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

3 posted 2001-06-12 09:32 AM

Thank you. Glad you enjoyed the haiku.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

4 posted 2001-06-12 03:11 PM

Julian--I like this...nicely done.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-06-12 03:17 PM

Nice haiku, Julian. I like this.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

6 posted 2001-06-12 03:18 PM

very sharp o yuh

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

7 posted 2001-06-12 06:16 PM

Atta girl! Loved it!

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