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Tovi
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 168

0 posted 2001-06-11 02:31 PM

Swept within his arms
my love flowed
poured from lips
gentle fingertips
and he took greedily
the tender kisses so longed for
Igniting the delicate flame of my heart
into the fires of his passion
and the flames,
so beautiful and bright,
alit the night
in a love as old as time
Awakening the depths of two souls
having searched forever to finally
be joined as one,
Again

Not only to say the right thing in the right place, but far more difficult, to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2001-06-11 02:46 PM

Tovi...I am enjoying your work SO much..a welcome addition to passions. Gentle , but Passionate...I like very much!

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

2 posted 2001-06-11 03:14 PM

Soft and romantic...lovely write.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

3 posted 2001-06-11 03:26 PM

love can be so intense. love it.

Charisma

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2001-06-11 04:18 PM

lovely words tovi..nicely done..

~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2001-06-11 04:22 PM

Passionate.... well done

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

6 posted 2001-06-11 06:41 PM

Romantically written, Tovi...I really enjoyed this! Great work!

sp

I hopelessly, helplessly, wonder why
Everything gotta change around me
I’d tell it to your face,
But you lost your face along the way...

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-06-11 06:42 PM

ah yes. . . let the Romance flow. . .

this is wonderful!!

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2001-06-11 06:43 PM

Tovi..Tovi..Tovi...so nice...James

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

9 posted 2001-06-11 08:17 PM

Tovi, lovely thoughts!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Tovi
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 168

10 posted 2001-06-11 08:22 PM

Thank you so much, everyone, for the kind replies.

Not only to say the right thing in the right place, but far more difficult, to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment.

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

11 posted 2001-06-11 08:33 PM

Aww geez, Tovi, you just keep getting better and better..very nice write...gentle smile

Mark
Junior Member

since 2001-06-13

Posts 18

12 posted 2001-06-13 10:20 PM

Beautiful love. My compliments.

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

13 posted 2001-06-14 12:35 PM

Cheers...to agains! Enjoyed.

IWithinYou
Junior Member

since 2001-06-14

Posts 21
Within You

14 posted 2001-06-14 03:45 AM

My this is so full
of life and love
To be in such a place
the envy of us all.

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