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RMW
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0 posted 2001-05-21 10:56 PM


Untitled

Slender
Like a candle came
The moon into our room.
And for a time
We were its flame,
Remember?

RMW

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Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-05-21 11:10 PM


I really like this!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


JLR
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2 posted 2001-05-22 12:40 PM


How emotionally, powerfully have you said so much...in such few words.  Remember...
S Arthur Grey
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3 posted 2001-05-22 01:02 AM


a deftly illuminated memory.
nice work.

S Arthur

. . . Hills jump with brooks.
trees tumble out of twigs and sticks;
e e cummings

Severn
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4 posted 2001-05-22 06:15 AM


Wonderful!

I love this..

K

nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2001-05-22 06:27 AM


a perfect vision..I am saving this sweet one

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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6 posted 2001-05-22 07:16 AM


RMW~
Sometimes upon a memory dwell ~
The flame flickers ~
Oh, so brightly ~

This is one of those times ~

Lovely ~
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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7 posted 2001-05-22 08:59 AM


The cool of the night, lighting the way of delight....

an excellent read....

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Deep in the heart
8 posted 2001-05-22 09:01 AM


Whoa!  Bob!  This I like too much    You number one poet!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


RMW
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9 posted 2001-05-22 10:29 AM


Hi all. I tried posting a "thank you" for each of you but the computer froze up. Which of you was not telling the truth? The computer KNOWS!! Seriously, thank you much. You are all too kind.  Bob
Martie
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10 posted 2001-05-22 10:40 AM


Bob--just a few perfectly chosen words can light up a page.  You have done that.
Corinne
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11 posted 2001-05-22 01:14 PM


Beautiful, Bob.

Cor

Titia Geertman
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12 posted 2001-05-22 02:19 PM


Such a beauty, beauty, beauty

Titia

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