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Victoria
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0 posted 2001-06-10 10:55 PM


May I be your morning glory?
your golden ray of sunlight
May I be your sweet bouquet?
your afternoon delight

May I be your moonflower?
Your blossom of moonlight
May I be your lover?
beneath your cowboy's hat, white

I feel your fiery kisses
galloping across my skin
in the warmth of campfire light
beneath coyotes heavens
My cowboy..My lover of the night

Deep within the canyons
our secret rendezvous
your calloused hands arouse me
in the sunlight of a golden hue

In the saddle of romance
I long for your kiss
my cowboy, my lover
your tender love, I would miss


Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso


© Copyright 2001 Victoria - All Rights Reserved
Logan
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1 posted 2001-06-10 11:11 PM


Ahhh, Victoria, such tender feelings come through with your words...gentle smile
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2 posted 2001-06-10 11:16 PM


Ah......what woman could resist a man in a cowboy hat?!  LOL   Loved this, Victoria!

Not only to say the right thing in the right place, but far more difficult, to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment.

Victoria
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3 posted 2001-06-11 08:08 AM


Thank you so much Logan and tovi...thank you for peeking in..

                      ~Victoria~


Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso


JamesMichael
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4 posted 2001-06-11 08:38 AM


Ride em cowboy...James
Victoria
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5 posted 2001-06-11 04:35 PM


Giddey Up James ha...nice to hear from you today

             ~Victoria~


Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso


snowpants
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6 posted 2001-06-11 06:48 PM


'May I be your morning glory?
your golden ray of sunlight
May I be your sweet bouquet?
your afternoon delight

May I be your moonflower?
Your blossom of moonlight
May I be your lover?
beneath your cowboy's hat, white'

Oooh...so romantic, Victoria...I love this!  Great write...

sp  

I hopelessly, helplessly, wonder why
Everything gotta change around me
I’d tell it to your face,
But you lost your face along the way...

Poeminister
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7 posted 2001-06-11 09:30 PM


"I feel your fiery kisses
galloping across my skin"

Love this...beautiful and sensual.

PM

Lone Wolf
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8 posted 2001-06-11 09:34 PM


Very romantic write.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Victoria
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9 posted 2001-06-14 07:38 PM


Thank you folks...so glad you enjoyed

                 ~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

                                            Pablo Picasso


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