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Mysteria
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0 posted 2001-06-10 10:03 PM




~* Apple Blossom Time *~


As evening begins to spread its blanket,
I venture outside to inhale, and my journey begins.
As I sit under a tiara of stars illuminating the heavens,
One single apple blossom petal falls every so gently,
And lands so softly on my outstretched arm.
The smell in the air is of freesia, roses, and fresh cut grass,
Announcing the changes of the urgently waiting season.
A shaken feather pillow of petals so gently falls,
Illuminating the gray abyss surrounding me.
In a multitude of sequins; this flickering pink light,
Dancing petals pirouette and begin their magic.
Promises of the new summer swirl gently from the sky,
Bringing with them kisses of renewal and rebirth.
Where once was a beautiful flower,
Shall emerge a succulent summer fruit.
The earth takes me and wraps me in her silent blanket,
As I bow my head to her and close my eyes.
With supreme honor I now bare witness,
To the final curtain call of just one of my many blessings.


~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them ~*~

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Janet Marie
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1 posted 2001-06-10 10:07 PM


A shaken feather pillow of petals so gently falls,
Illuminating the gray abyss surrounding me.
In a multitude of sequins; this flickering pink light,
Dancing petals pirouette and begin their magic.
Promises of the new summer swirl gently from the sky,
Bringing with them kisses of renewal and rebirth.
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beautiful imagery and anticpation found in the changing seasons...
very lovely Mysteria...as always.  

Logan
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2 posted 2001-06-10 10:25 PM


oh my stars, Mysteria, your words flow like creek waters over the shallows, so soft, so musical. I dearly love reading all you write...gentle smile
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3 posted 2001-06-10 10:29 PM


....and you are a blessing to us, Mysteria  
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2001-06-10 10:38 PM


Mysteria~

'The earth takes me and wraps me in her silent blanket,
As I bow my head to her and close my eyes.'


Oh, gonna just sit around and knock out a little poetry, huh ?
Don't know for sure what it will be -
'a little of this and that' ...

Lady !  You tickle me and amaze me with your lovely writes !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Mysteria
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5 posted 2001-06-10 10:51 PM


Janet Marie; Oh I love your responses, I really do.

Logan: I am so happy I tickle your innards!

Balladeer: My goodness!  Hi there!  And thank you kind sir as are you too are a real blessing, how about a story please?

Marge: Well I told you I was bored! And they are spitting out like I said, a little of this, a little of that *wink*

~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them ~*~

Watersign6
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6 posted 2001-06-11 07:19 AM


you make me   i love it so,this is absolutely lovely and a delight to read
i could smell the apple blossoms and roses and freshly cut lawn  

ethome
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7 posted 2001-06-11 07:23 AM


Beautiful picture!  Beautiful poem!
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8 posted 2001-06-11 07:29 AM


very soft and hopefull... nice imagery and descriptive passages.. enjoyed!

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