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Red Sky Cry
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Red Sky Cry |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Red Sky Cry ~*Marge Tindal*~  Underneath the earth History lies encrusted Inescapable Injustice covered over Layer after layer after layer ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
Applauds!!!!!!!!! Marge, this is outstanding! My favorite of yours to date.  Not only to say the right thing in the right place, but far more difficult, to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment. |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
few words but very powerful read,really enjoyed it  |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
And here we make history, eh,Marge? Another of yours to touch me, gentle one...gentle smile |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Down to the core indeed. Nicely penned. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Marge, are you saying we are rotten to the core?  signed.....your old fossil |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh Marge...the face is marvelous, looking back at us.... and I've been playing with the idea of a theme, along these lines, but still...different.... having read this, I know we are "talking" tonight.... so I shall work on it! This...my friend...is marvelous! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tovi~ Thank you very much. KelliKay~ I appreciate the read. Logan~ Indeed, will we ever unearth the truths, or will we compound the layers with more lies of injustice ? Thank you for understanding~ PoeMinister~ Thank you so much. FossilizedBalladeer~ Not ALL of us !  Karilea~ When spirits walk ... I think that's our theme song ...  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Marge this is beautiful. I don't think I am brave enough to look under the layers. Show us more, ME |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
It is facinating to think, that we live on such history and changes...and frightening to think of the layers we are adding now. Great poem! [This message has been edited by Martie (edited 06-11-2001).] |
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Soaringeagle Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 156CANADA |
TODAY ANOTHER LAYER BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN MAIDEN..... red sky at night a sailor's delight my canoe awaits you! warrior |
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Nathaniel Shain Junior Member
since 2001-06-03
Posts 35 |
Marge, Well done! Nathaniel |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Let the truth be spoken, and the shame will fall away in layers. Excellent Marge. ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them ~*~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
layer after layer after layer of skillful writing... you always leave an amazing impression on me, my friend... Regards, sudhir |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Excellent! In a few words you convey the essence of the image and leave the reader to ponder their own layers.. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
~*~ bloody tears of clouds reveal slowly history witness from the past injustice will be convict when earth peels her layers off *~* Marge....fabulous tanka my dear friend, going straith to my library. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Oops forgot to make that tread |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MotherEarth~ Your ID matches this piece perfectly ! Much to be found in the layers, sweet lady. Martie~ Each layer holds the past - and we write another layer each day. Yes ... it is a little frightening, isn't it ? *Hugs* SoaringEagle~ Hello, love ! !  Promise ? Canoeing with you beats an excavation seven-ways-to-sundown ! I love you. Nathaniel~ Thank you so much. Welcome to Passions. Mysteria~ The truths are so deeply buried in the past. One would wonder if they will ever be brought to light. Thank you, hon. Sudhir~ *Hugs* Thank you, sweetie. CPatHair~ I enjoyed your reply. Thank you. Charisma~ The Tanka seemed to tell the story so well. Thank you for sharing yours with me. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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