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just some haiku. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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wind blows through the trees branches sway and bend alone my heart moves with them rain falls softly now covers grass in drops of life I dance now again sun shines brightly now cascading down on my heart dance with her body and one funny senryu phone crackles again interrupting my speaking throw against the wall ------------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 06-10-2001).] |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Sven, I think they're adorable. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well done Sven my friend....nice images! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
if reverie rings think it not the phone that brings sun into your heart |
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Cheryl Flemming Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 102 |
I love the pictures that these paint.I have only written a couple hiaku but have really come to love reading them.They say so much in so few words. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
The phone...invader of many a fine dream and poem. Loved this! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Nice haiku, and you sound happy. I like that! Sandra |
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pres56 Junior Member
since 2001-06-09
Posts 28 |
I like this sooo good. pres |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
 Temper temper, eh?  You know what, you write beautifully. Did I ever tell you that? Thanks for making me smile, Beautiful Heart! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
the last one...*s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Wonderful haikuing...nicely done Sven. |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
your so good at haiku very few words but all ring true  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I love it Sven......this was wonderful!! On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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