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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2001-05-21 08:51 PM




How come I am so fond of nature
while she is hurting me so much

The stinging nettle stings my fingers
keeps me itching for several days
The goutweed is covering my soil
and gets me a backache while
sitting on my knees to pull it out
The sorrel grows bigger every year
so I get a headache by only looking
Shells of walnuts paint my hands brown
getting them coarse when I scrub hard
The heavy clay soil brakes my nails
when I dig a hole to put in new plants
And then the roses
they always scratch my hands, arms and legs
till the blood comes out leaving little scars

How come I am so fond of nature
I will tell you straight away

the stinging nettle provides me for
soup and delicious little pancakes
the goutweed and sorrel just want me
to show their overwhelming blossoms
the walnuts gives me delicacies and
its shells a pigment to dye the wool
the clay soil just tells me to be gentle
And the roses
Ahhhh, the smell of roses carries me
to paradise when they bloom in all
their variety of colours and shapes

So honestly my dear friends
I wouldn't have it any other way




[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 05-21-2001).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-05-21 09:33 PM


See...See?!  It takes a poet to find the truth and beauty in any adverse fact of nature...

thank you for this!

Lone Wolf
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2 posted 2001-05-21 10:00 PM


I love the optimism in this one, Titia.  Way to look for the good within.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Mother_Earth
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3 posted 2001-05-21 10:10 PM


Titia, I love this.  I love to "see" all of the beauty of nature, but don't know what to do with any of it.  One daughter can name and find a use for everything.  You think she got it from me?  lol   ME
Suetang
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4 posted 2001-05-21 10:22 PM


Titia
This was absolutely wonderful.........Sue

Suetang

Balladeer
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5 posted 2001-05-21 10:44 PM


pain and pleasure go hand in hand in so many ways....how refreshing to see someone write about the positive side...very well done  
Saunni
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6 posted 2001-05-21 11:54 PM


This is so very cool! I loved this!  

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

Severn
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7 posted 2001-05-21 11:59 PM


nice messages of hope here  

K

Irish Rose
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8 posted 2001-05-22 12:35 PM


what a refreshing look at nature, and I am a true nature lover, I must be a sadist!!!!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Poeminister
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9 posted 2001-05-22 12:58 PM


Well expressed.  Enjoyed the read.

Poeminister

poni
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10 posted 2001-05-22 01:02 AM


enjoyed this look at nature...taken a step closer!!!
Titia Geertman
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11 posted 2001-05-22 06:13 AM


Ahhh...nature....it's beauty shines through every season

Thank you all my friends for understanding.

Titia

Watersign6
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12 posted 2001-06-05 09:24 PM


i am so glad i found this one and it is a joy to read  
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