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Dew Kissed Morn (Revamped / Repost) |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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Dew Kissed Morn Sun peeks over eastern rim giving clouds hanging mid heaven spoiled cotton candy appearance all that my eyes see before me heavily dew kissed giving sparkle to the very parched earth The earth smelling freshly bathed cleansed of any unwanted residue refreshing tepid air flows slowly past where I am sitting giving pleasant thoughts of this dew kissed morn Winged creatures take a well earned rest waiting for the sun to dry up heavens tears for long and harsh summer has been Confusing this untimely storm giving heat thriving blossoms question on whether to stand tall brightly adorned or go in to hiding as onslaught of season approaches First storms of the season are welcomed friends but as time passes soured the thought of another day darkened and gray hoping the sun will cycle without interruption But for the moment I shall marvel at the sheer beauty of this dew kissed morn that Mother Nature so graciously has given me By, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) [This message has been edited by Cerenity (edited 06-10-2001).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Cerenity, this is absolutely gorgeous! WOW!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cerenity, My your feeling philosophic today. Lovely Sy |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh* I could dwell in this.....absolutely fantastic. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
"spoiled cotton candy appearance".... yes, I've seen those clouds! should "weather" be "whether"[?] although, if not, I do like the play on words! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi, Denise, Sy, Charisma, Sunshine Thank you all so much for your loving reply's, Sunshine, I am not sure, I looked up both and really don't know which is the proper one to used? would be happy to find out if someone knows! Love, Cerenity |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it should be "whether". . . but, I like the idea of it being "weather". . . like Sunshine said, a play on words. . .  great job Cerenity, you're getting better with every line my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Cerenity, beautiful poem. "Build a man a fire, he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life". Terry Pratchett |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh my, dearest Cerenity, I too enjoy the refreshing and calm serenity of a beautiful dew-kissed morning! (smiles) Down here in Denver, it is very dry and hot during the summer, and I feel so happy when we have a break and I sit out on the front porch swing and breathe the beautiful summer rain air and see the mountains swim in the distance! (smiles) This is such a beautiful poem, sweet Cerenity, I always love your beautiful natural poems! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
This was beautiful, Cerenity. Very nice write!  All writing comes |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Lovely descriptive phrases here, Cerenity, lots of nice deep imagery! Kathleen Blake |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Cerenity, this is so beautiful. I, too, love the "dew-kissed-morn". In Michigan we have ALL kinds of weather and if you wait a minute, you get another kind. I love it when it is all sparkley and shine-y. ME |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi, Sven, Brian, Noah, Lone Wolf, Irish Rose, Mother Earth, Thank you all so very much for your kind reply's and Sven thank you for the info, Love, Cerenity |
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