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The Pen, Stayed
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The Pen, Stayed |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
The Pen, Stayed held in one’s hand a beauty of a Cross marbled green gold in accent worlds and words flow through held in his hand it is stayed held in her hand it goes astray fountainglorious it roams across vast sheets of white or yellow or pieces of brown, anytheme and anywhere she would put it down in black or blue-black or blue on blue she queries not the source but credits her muse, and crew he would remove as if by surgery the pen carve it out and away but then again the fire comes to her hazeling eyes and he steps back in realize that her pen, he cannot stay that in her hand, and in her command, perhaps, though, not at her demand this is why, the pen, stayed for someday, he might understand, and for this…. …..she prays |
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BrightStar Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 219 |
Wonderful [This message has been edited by BrightStar (edited 06-07-2001).] |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
A gentle lovely flow to this. My compliments! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
It would be a crime most felonious yes, a dsastardly deed most odious to stay a creative hand guiding pen he should be sentenced to serve two to ten.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Decaflame, Amen enjoyed the read. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Decalflame--I had a Cross that is lost, but the words come without it. I'm glad the passion of your pen cannot be stopped. Wonderful poem! |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
Wonderful words that flow with ease from your talented pen that will never cease  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DecaFlame~ Understanding more than you could know ... and yet ... I'm sure you do. This is a loving plea ... 'for someday, he might understand, and for this…. …..she prays' and someday perhaps~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very Well Done! Very nice way of putting it. Enjoyed this much! jwesley |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Thank you all very much for reading this....I am a little late with my regards back to each and every one of you, but that you found something here.... touches me.... here |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Amen. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I agree with all above...Wonderful flow and writing. Enjoyed this very much. Poeminister "..And deem each hour to musing given a step upon the road to Heaven" --Sir Walter Scott |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
My, my, my...this has to be my favorite of yours! May I take a copy for my favorites? May I dream that my pen might be so enamored with muse, to someone's eyes, someday? |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Nicely done. Bob |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
beautifully penned, Decaflame. "Like Sand underneath the snow, I make you mine." Kristin Hersh |
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