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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2001-06-06 07:37 PM




I had to write this down

F irst poem submitted here
E ager to see the replies
E ndless waiting, nothing yet
L OL, so it seemed to me

A fter a while I met friends
T o whom I dared to confine

H eartbreaking poems I read
O ver so many lost desires
M oving poems reaching me
E very now and than a laugh

F inding you was my good luck
R eborn my mind does feel
I 'm so glad I belong to you
E very moment I can share
N ever let this place be gone
D ear friends keep writing on
S o I can feel at home




A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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© Copyright 2001 Titia Geertman - All Rights Reserved
Sven
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1 posted 2001-06-06 07:38 PM


now you know why we stay Titia. . .  

wonderfully done!!!

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Irish Rose
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2 posted 2001-06-06 07:41 PM


I'm so glad you are here, Titia

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Poet deVine
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3 posted 2001-06-06 07:45 PM


You should feel at home....you ARE home here!  
kaile
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4 posted 2001-06-06 10:20 PM


i appreciate your light-hearted musings...

will take time to read your work..write on!!

Deafheaven
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since 2001-06-02
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Sudbury, Ontario, Canada
5 posted 2001-06-06 10:24 PM


Welcome new friend.  I am new here myself.  I love acrostics.  One of the very first poems I ever wrote was an acrostic and is posted here (called Jennifer).  Had never even heard the word acrostic when I wrote it.  Thought I was being all clever. heh heh ... I'm such a geek

Anyway, welcome ... and nicely done

The pain I have felt is material to the journal of my life
And I have scrawled many an erroneous line upon its yellowed pages
-Deafheaven

Sudhir Iyer
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Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
6 posted 2001-06-07 04:42 AM


Be at home, Titia.

Reside and let us all feel proud of this home...

nice work...

regards,
sudhir

Kit McCallum
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7 posted 2001-06-07 06:13 AM


You've chose such a wonderful phrase to build this lovely acrostic Titia ... a beautiful tribute to this special home we've all found, nicely done!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Kethry
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Victoria Australia
8 posted 2001-06-07 06:44 AM


Beautifully done Titia, you are so clever!
write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life.  Patty Hansen.



Cpat Hair
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9 posted 2001-06-07 09:19 AM


Nicely done and clever... enjoyed the read!
Interloper
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Deep in the heart
10 posted 2001-06-07 09:29 AM


You , and folks like you, are the reason we remain here at Passions.  In many, many ways, just like one big family
OLIAS
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11 posted 2001-06-07 09:11 PM


Great acrostic, masterfully penned. Wauw, and thank you.

Regards,
Olias.

Temptress
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12 posted 2001-06-08 01:29 AM


Now this is very well done!   I love your message, and am glad you feel at home here. Stick around, the feeling grows in 'leaps and bounds' every day.  

Mistletoe Angel
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13 posted 2001-06-08 01:38 AM


(smiles) Such a beautiful acrostic straight from your heart! You are a treasure to Passions, and sunshine to us all, and we will always write on, for you and everyone and for our dreams. (smiles) We all love you so very much, sweet Titia! Write on with all your heart! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Titia Geertman
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14 posted 2001-06-08 02:31 AM


After so many lovely words, what else can I say than:  I feel at home  

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

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