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I Met Her Today
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I Met Her Today |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert 
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I cannot kiss you like before I cannot let you through my door I loved you so but no more I met her today I cannot let you touch my cheek I can no longer let you speak I no longer will be meek I met her today I met you and you lied to me I believed the life you let me see To think I thought you just a mystery I met her today You wined and dined me in romance You made me sigh just from your glance You convinced me to give you a chance Well I met her today You told me you were out of town You said you soon would be around Look at the deception I have found I met her today She called and said we should meet She said she would admit defeat Said she did not want to compete I met her today This beautiful woman who is your wife She is the one who shares your life I took it all in silent strife I met her today I told her to worry not about me You I will no longer see Home with her is where you should be I met her today So I cannot kiss you like before I will not let you in my door You made me feel like such a whore I met her today I hope she believes I did not know She seemed to when I told her so I cannot believe you are so low I met her today I hope she leaves you soon for good She said she will, I know I would And the reason is understood I met her today. Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
When the "other woman" meets the wife the hounds hell break loose. Well done. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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zzz Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 55 |
two women scorned this guy best watch out! |
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Deafheaven Junior Member
since 2001-06-02
Posts 23Sudbury, Ontario, Canada |
I really really really really enjoyed this. I posted, just the other day, an untitled work that spoke of the lies and betrayal I was forced to confront. I just loved how you expressed yourself in this piece peace, love, happiness The pain I have felt is material to the journal of my life |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
As always my most gracious thanks. Pure fiction for me, but what a true tale for how many? Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Powerful. Applause from me...would say more, but funny how the truth falls into place like that at times. Wonderful writing! |
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