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Once Again |
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startin_fresh Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 137US |
The dragon flares it's nostrils As the minstrel plays the tune The knight errant rides again But refuses to see the truth The image in the looking glass is that of a facade grown old The strength that holds it in place Is the cracking mortar around the core "You can't reason with your heart; it has it's own laws and thumps about things which the intellect scorns." |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Good economy of language in this, I'm impressed. Kathleen Blake |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
It nice to see the knight spirit still exists, Look deeper in the mirror to she the shadow of the knight within you. Write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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startin_fresh Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 137US |
Irish Rose - I'm trying to vary my writing style. A change from the epic poems I am usually penning. Thank you for your kind review. Kethry - hand me some windex so i can look at that mirror. *smile* Shawn "You can't reason with your heart; it has it's own laws and thumps about things which the intellect scorns." |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
StartinFresh~ This is nicely done. The change in style becomes you. I enjoyed it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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