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Hollowman
Member

since 2001-06-01

Posts 117

0 posted 2001-06-04 08:47 PM

My love do you see the wounds of our reality
Our hearts ripped open beating on cold floor,
How much pain must we endure?
Is this the product of the loving kind?
Or is this the result of a love gone blind.
Rescue me from this rift so deep,
allow my tired eyes to sleep,
so when I wake I see once more this boat of hope saved from the shore.

Rich

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-06-04 11:27 PM

this is very touching......

latin passion
Senior Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 576

2 posted 2001-06-05 12:51 PM

I've read a couple of your poems, This one I really enjoyed. One could feel your word. Wonderful.

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

3 posted 2001-06-05 02:28 PM

this is just awesome,good job and i am off to read more of yours

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-06-05 02:35 PM

Wow, very tender write. Filled with a sense of longing. Very nice.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

5 posted 2001-06-05 03:32 PM

Ditto all of the above... beautiful!

*smiles*

~Tier

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

6 posted 2001-06-05 03:33 PM

pretty cool read o yuh

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2001-06-05 03:46 PM

(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh my gosh, this is so heartbreaking, I don't know what to say! So much sorrow in these words and I can only pray that you help each others hope stay afloat and keep this love strong, but if you are feeling it's all gone, talk to her, and say it may be best if you'd take a while alone or decide to stay. Follow your heart, dear friend! (big hugggsssss) So very sad but beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, dear friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

8 posted 2001-06-05 03:50 PM

this boat of hope saved from the shore
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Nice play on words. Well done.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

9 posted 2001-06-05 03:53 PM

Enjoyed this. Wonderful writing.

Poeminister

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2001-06-05 05:18 PM

welcome to passions

enjoyed

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