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Lady In White
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0 posted 2001-03-24 05:30 PM


Was but just a robe
ordinary homespun worn
softly spoke few words

stripped of His red robe
ordinary homespun words
echoes are still heard

One who lived by deed
taken up with all God speed
homespun love in word



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1 posted 2001-03-24 10:23 PM


"Was but just a robe
ordinary homespun worn
softly spoke few words"

Liked this part best Very nicely done! SEA

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2 posted 2001-03-25 02:08 PM


homespun worn
homespun words,
homespun love.

Guess sometimes one has to make or do it themselfs...

Great write.
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3 posted 2001-03-25 03:28 PM


"One who lived by deed
taken up with all God speed
homespun love in word"

Homespun most precious.
Straight from the heart.

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4 posted 2001-03-26 02:29 PM


SEA, Bernie, Inot2B, thank you all for taking a moment out of your day to read this...
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5 posted 2001-03-27 11:45 AM


Many years ago, I read a book with this same title that touched me deeply... your poem is every bit as excellent. *S*
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6 posted 2001-04-03 09:17 PM


this is touching very spiritual
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7 posted 2001-04-03 10:27 PM


Very profound write.  Nice work!

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8 posted 2001-04-04 12:33 PM


Nicely done, Lady. Some robes are more signifigant than others....
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9 posted 2001-04-04 01:33 PM


His being the most significant of all...thank you all for taking time to read this....
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