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Sunshine

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0 posted 2001-04-07 07:42 AM

Season’s Change Senryu

darkly, quietly
Frost obnubilated day
obscurely to gray

blowing windy say
obliterating spring’s day
clutching cold vainly

Spring, amiably,
beckoned Persephone, come,
softly, warmth slipped in

crocus now peeks out
Robins chasing worms about
soft winds kissing cheeks

ah, winter’s last sigh
before assuming it’s leave
left fond memories

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 04-07-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved

Waseem Cheema
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1 posted 2001-04-07 08:13 AM

So tough it is...........

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2 posted 2001-04-07 08:36 AM

ahhhhh.....beautiful, and longing for spring and summer now.

loved reading it very much my friend

((hugs))
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3 posted 2001-04-07 09:12 AM

Warming rays of sun
Enveloping snow-capped mount
Flush for summer's bloom

Lone Wolf
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4 posted 2001-04-07 09:20 AM

Beautifully done, Sunshine. The changing of seasons is a glorious sight to behold.

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by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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5 posted 2001-04-07 10:45 AM

Karilea~
Just LOVELY !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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6 posted 2001-04-07 10:49 AM

Absolutely lovely, but I have to admit I had extreme difficulty reading the pale, pale stanza.

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7 posted 2001-04-07 10:51 AM

Sunshine~ these are wonderful! It snowed here last night....we have about 2 inches.....good grief....

SEA

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8 posted 2001-04-07 11:59 AM

Pussy willow buds
Forsythia yellow bright
Spring's color resumes

Thank you - (and for adding to my vocabulary:
"obnubilated" ~G~)

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