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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-04-07 12:05 PM



First Touch

Warm and sweet
is the moment
when fingertips
reach out,
hands connect,
kissed slightly
by white velvet rose petals
glistening with dew,
as eyes
capture the memory of
their first touch


~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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wayoutwalt
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1 posted 2001-04-07 12:11 PM


nice lil write yuh
nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2001-04-07 12:56 PM


yuh, was a little one, wasn't it   sometimes that is all that is needed.

thank you Walt

~Wynter/M

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Writer
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3 posted 2001-04-07 01:43 AM


Short but very sweet. Thank you for your poem
Joyce Johnson
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4 posted 2001-04-07 01:49 AM


Very sweet thoughts.  Joyce
walker
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5 posted 2001-04-07 02:50 PM


Lovely!
Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2001-04-07 03:21 PM


Wynter~
Special softness in this capture !
Just right !
~*Marge*~

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Nate Dogg
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7 posted 2001-04-07 06:27 PM


Wonderful imagery, wonderful write!!

Nathan

nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2001-04-08 04:32 AM


Writer
and thank yo for thaking the time to read *s

Joyce
glad you enjoyed!

walker
thank you  

Marge
some days I have softeness in me I guess Marge
thank you

Nate
thank you Nate, it's nice to be appreciated


~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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