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PoeticaL
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since 2001-03-31
Posts 50


0 posted 2001-04-05 10:46 PM


you are simply amazing
it’s quite simple i think
it’s not the look in your eyes
no it surely can’t be
and it’s not the alcohol in my drink
it’s just what i know to be
i remember the first time
i heard of your name
i remember its impact
it’s remained so much the same

it’s amazing how
our friendship has grown
not like storm winds
those go by mostly unknown
but like a whisper
on the fairest lips
it came on it’s own time
melting me
sweet like chocolate chips

in my mind i am
thinking of you
kissing and caressing you
with soothing kindness
all of the time
i always find
that you are
the breath for my mind

sappy and sincere
sometimes go hand in hand
in my dreams i am with you
matching your footprints
beside mine in my drifting sand

it’s not that i love you
like romantics do
i love you like the petals
of daisies adore their stem
the way seahorses love
the seas that safely surround them

i love you like you love the sky
when it’s carrying its pinkest hue
you see it for its beauty pure
and know that life is perfect
in that moment you know it for sure

i wish for life to bring you happiness
with good mornings all around
new photographs for albums
new memories for smiles to be found
you are my soul mate my friend
despite all the miles in my dreams


~thank you for teaching me what friendship is~


© Copyright 2001 Kristy - All Rights Reserved
Mother_Earth
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since 2000-11-20
Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan
1 posted 2001-04-06 12:05 PM


PoeticaL, you have written a wonderful tribute to a friend.  What more could a person wish for than to have this!  I hope the friend sees this.  Lovely, ME
Mabel A. Dilley
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since 2001-03-17
Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA
2 posted 2001-04-06 12:09 PM


YOu had me at "melting chocolate chips" but what do I know of candy; however speak of memories brought by the dying light and memories imbedded in rainbow and I'm right with you.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Brad Majors
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Georgia
3 posted 2001-04-06 09:59 AM


Your darkone smiles back   Great piece!
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