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Ricochet Rain |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Ricochet Rain ~*Marge Tindal*~ Above Clouds of dark gray Pelt down on your parade Don't let the rain catch you crying But then again, who would even notice? Might be a torrential downpour If you are caught in rain Umbrella thoughts Above ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Don't let the rain catch you crying.....love this line Marge!! Well done on this style of writing too! *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
But then again, who would even notice? I WOULD!!!  and LOVED the "umbrella thoughts above!" You connected again, m.o.m.s.  Hugs. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentleSpirit~ I had fun with the form ... and it flowed as easily as the rain.  Serenity~ Sure ... but would ya' share your umbrella ? Yeah .... you would ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mabel A. Dilley Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 859Seattle, WA, USA |
I see you've stepped into a time machine that transported you to my part of the world and its rain. The local Bartells has the answer in rainbow colors: bumbershoots for all. "I am not now that which I have been." |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
Nice rictameter Marge. I'm going to be away from my computer for a few days (which will drive me crazy) but I intend to spend some of my time working on this form. It is fun and challenging. Good job. Mike |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Yes my lady, in fine form you are again! Enjoyed. |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
yes a very well done rictameter. with a great message. don't let the rain catch you cryin"... reminded me of an old song long ago. I loved this!! hugs, Koko Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Marge, my friend... Thanks for this one... Regards, Sudhir |
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