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Wilfred Yeats
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0 posted 2001-04-04 02:30 PM


(apologetic - because - I mislabeled the senyrus yesterday)

In you
I find ev'ry
Thing I desire in life
Make me all I've wanted to be
Love you


You are
Personified
All I've conceived as love
Your thoughts, your beauty, all you are
I love


Through time
All time to come
Wherever life finds us
At sea, on shore, on mountain trail
We're love


My past
My every prayer
Has been conceiving you
The romantic match for my heart
You're here


Time sees
Our love growing
Not static, not slowing
Through eternity it will shine
We're us

The first duty of love is to listen.

~ Paul Tillich ~

© Copyright 2001 Wilfred Yeats - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-04-04 02:32 PM


AMAZING!  I am stunned!  This is fantabulous!  

AUTHOR!

More, please.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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with you
2 posted 2001-04-04 02:33 PM


these are romantic cinquains!!! Very nicely done WY    SEA
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2001-04-04 02:36 PM


Ah, no apologies necessary when you come back with treasures such as these....
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4 posted 2001-04-04 05:37 PM


it's lovely, WIlfred
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