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Mother_Earth
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0 posted 2001-04-04 12:21 PM



I'm just sitting here listening
        to the quiet

The breeze is flowing through the
        newly budded trees

Pairs of birds are hunting for a nesting place
       and a perfect spot to put it

In hopes the Spring buds will bring forth
        a covering of leaves

I'm just sitting here enjoying the perfume
          in the air

If bottled the label would read......
          ... Spring-times Best

I see little creatures scurrying by and
         only they know to where

Come sit awhile and you too can give your
           mind and body a rest

© Copyright 2001 Mother_Earth - All Rights Reserved
Nate Dogg
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1 posted 2001-04-04 12:26 PM


I feel as if I'm sitting beside you ME, as I read this nicely flowed poem....very nice writing!!

Nathan

Mother_Earth
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2 posted 2001-04-04 12:29 PM


Nate, thank you  and there is lots of room!  
Lady In White
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3 posted 2001-04-04 01:37 PM


A lovely entrance to spring...
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4 posted 2001-04-04 02:48 PM


What a restful read.  May I sit down beside you for a while and share?

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


Mother_Earth
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5 posted 2001-04-04 04:13 PM


Lady In White, thank you

Interloper, you are most welcome.

Butterflies_dont_cry
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6 posted 2001-04-04 06:43 PM


I wanna come!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
loved this my mom...a very relaxing write~

Sven
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7 posted 2001-04-04 06:53 PM


ahhh. . . on the shores of Lake Michigan. . . one of my favorite places to be. . .

thank you ME. . .love this one!!!  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Mother_Earth
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8 posted 2001-04-04 06:57 PM


Butterflies, my kid, we will find it and go there and just listen to the quiet!  SOON

Sven, Lake Michigan or any place you want it to be. I hope everyone has such a place.  

Janet Marie
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9 posted 2001-04-05 04:14 PM


yes... spring does give us that healing peace of renewal...
serene and wise inspire here M.E.
well done!!  

It's such a clever innocence with which you show myself to me
As if you know how it feels to never be who you wanted to be
~jackson browne~

wayoutwalt
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10 posted 2001-04-05 04:20 PM


i want to so badly but thanks for the invite i guess only your poem can take me there. yuh yuh
Mother_Earth
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11 posted 2001-04-05 07:59 PM


Janet Marie, thank you. Hope it last long enough to really enjoy.

wayoutwalt,I'll bet if you close your eyes and think real hard, you will find that place.  And you are welcome at mine.

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