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thecraig
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0 posted 2001-04-04 02:49 AM



Bring on an inward wiggle,
tighten muscles to the tinniest squiggle,
then when weakness starts it's niggle,
extend those limits to extensions trickle;

Only a plain same remains to blame,
banning every inventive fame,
reaching to frustrations pickle,
then backing away extremely fickle;
need need needling needing tickles;

Play filled burst's of extra zest,
reaching shares with future quest's,
additions above historic test's
to new solution's
& their brief rests;

Faster than the flow,
steadier than the heart,
imaginations kind,
brings worries to depart,
while they drift away,
& kindness starts to stay,
then is time to shake,
whip up, build, create,
idea's substance, structure, stance's,
stemmed from love,
& life enhances.



© Copyright 2001 Craig Poole - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-04-04 03:03 AM


I absoutely loved this, particularly the last stanza, just wonderful!
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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2001-04-04 03:39 PM


Not sure I understood, but a lively read.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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3 posted 2001-04-04 03:45 PM


Nicely done, craig.  Cool rhyme scheme.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

helen smith
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4 posted 2001-04-04 06:04 PM


hellllooooooooo   craig   I looked for you and  found you in here  ..hiding among  the words ....nice to see you
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