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walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-04-03 08:55 PM



I woke up one day,
and my connection to you was,
undesirable.
When and how it tore apart,
I cannot tell.
But I know it happened,
slowly.
Just like a droplet,
eating away a mountain.
Just like the way,
beauty withers away.
And in my dreams,
we're still together.
But my reality,
cannot accept,
the mental image of us together.
It's undesirable to me.

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-04-03 10:40 PM


what a sad tone!!
Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
2 posted 2001-04-03 10:41 PM


Oh, have I been there before.  You have expressed this feeling very well, walker.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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