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Open Poetry #13

Unlock My Poetry( Turn the key)

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

0 posted 2001-04-03 01:46 PM

Lost in between the lines,
What makes up this hidden rhyme,
Words seem to have fallen in their time,
No nsync, no purpose, can't seem to find,
A reason for this lack of words,
Just caught up in this vacuum,
Sucking all my brilliant poetic notes,
Mind imagines the colors of the ocean,
Maybe soon I'll find this hidden potion,
That will dazzle the dream weavers scarf,
Still dangling in this whirlwind scheme,
Maybe I'm stuck in the spiders web,
Centered in this hidden maze,
If only poetry were my hero,
Of so much praise,
What words could pull me out,
Of this quicksand rhyme,
Let me venture to say a rhyme,
Ah quicksand murral from this trance,
Make me, break me, but never ever circumstance,
Me to this dungeon of surmise, unlock
This heaviness that I grieve,
Make me, mold me,
But above all else just set me free,
Free into this world of rhyme,
Free to live with flight of time,
Free to fly the bluest skies,
Free to swim the deepest sea's
Free to fill the magic kingdom,
Free to unlock this heart,
Make in me a brand new start,
To breath and percieve
a brand new world.

Panne447
Member

since 2001-04-03

Posts 196
S.A. TX

1 posted 2001-04-03 02:01 PM

Rosebud. Well I think we've all been in this circumstance a few times - thanks for your version of it. Panne

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

2 posted 2001-04-03 03:01 PM

Yes we all can relate! Good piece!

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2001-04-03 04:24 PM

I did it, I unlocked it!!!

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

4 posted 2001-04-03 04:47 PM

What a lovely expression of common circumstances. I trust your keys unlocks the creative doors.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

5 posted 2001-04-03 11:08 PM

thanks, Sometimes my heart seeks to find the passions locked up, and when released not so easily put into words.

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