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Honeybee
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0 posted 2001-04-02 10:55 PM



Cry Of My Heart





The pain of alone
shivered slowly
from the remembrance of my heart
oozing
like cancerous sores,
mama's healing embrace depart
howl of bond no more
from unseen betrayal bestowed

if I must crawl away from you
I'd do so...
yes, I love you this much...

recognition of hurt...anulled
medusa of fate's stare
blind-folds my will
'morrows promises dulled
weakens the roar of my cries behind your ignore
a stone-bitter pill
swallowing sorrow of intense,
awakening to
the shrill of silence
hope interlaces not
as toes unfold
from the haven of bedsheets -
my linen crutch,
tears defy sun's rays
the ground is much colder
dead upon touch
this path of astray
heart weeps in shadowed grey

~*By Melissa Honeybee*~


[This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 04-03-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
Lone Wolf
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1 posted 2001-04-02 10:59 PM


Oh Melissa, how this one oozes with hurt.  Such sadness in these lines.  You have been severly wronged my friend, I hope she sees the error of her ways and makes it right.  life it way to short for scenes such as this one.     Best wishes to you. ~hugs~

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

JamesBowie
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2 posted 2001-04-02 11:00 PM


Oh no. too much sadness. I like this but ugghhh It feels painful
Chelsea~
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3 posted 2001-04-03 10:28 AM


missy,

you've gone and
made me cry now.
a superior write by
you, but, so very sad.
hang in there, and I'm
here for you  

Sunshine
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4 posted 2001-04-03 11:12 AM


Ah my Melybee....

quote:
yes, I love you this much...




sometimes that is what it takes....

Irish Rose
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5 posted 2001-04-03 11:15 AM


((((((((hugs))))))))))))
Sven
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6 posted 2001-04-03 01:06 PM


know that you are never alone. . .

powerful words. . . from a tender heart. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Honeybee
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7 posted 2001-04-04 06:53 PM



Lone Wolf, JamesBowie, Chels, Karilea, Kathleen and Sven thank you for your encouragement and for reading this very personal piece~

Take care,
Melissa~

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