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Open Poetry #13

Emptiness

ForwardSearching
Junior Member

since 2001-03-23

Posts 35

0 posted 2001-04-02 06:10 PM

My heart is filled
To the point of bursting
With a love I knew
Now full of emptiness.

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

1 posted 2001-04-02 06:23 PM

Few words...much feeling.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-04-02 09:19 PM

You have said a mouthful. Not a pleasant feeling at all.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

PoeticaL
Member

since 2001-03-31

Posts 50

3 posted 2001-04-02 09:25 PM

I like the simple straightforwardness of your style here.

"I'm a junkyard full of false starts....Elliot Smith"

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

4 posted 2001-04-02 09:40 PM

Short and to the point. Well done.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

5 posted 2001-04-02 10:27 PM

so few words with so much meaning.
It's true the heart has a mind of it's own, that we can not betray no matter how hard we try.

JamesBowie
Member

since 2000-11-25

Posts 252
big old Bangor Maine up by the shack

6 posted 2001-04-02 10:43 PM

I like your style. All meat. good job and welcome to the forum

Red-uni
Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 192
Georgia, USA

7 posted 2001-04-02 11:32 PM

WOW. How well I know that feeling.
Red

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