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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-04-01 07:53 AM




with love, one reached out
took your hand, held you safe, close
then filled all your nights



© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-04-01 08:17 AM


such a romantic way to  begin the morning....thank you, Sunshine...
2dalimit
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2 posted 2001-04-01 08:26 AM


To feel loved is grand.
Melton

Janet Marie
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3 posted 2001-04-01 09:08 AM


CONGRATS ON 13000!!!!!
whew...thats a lot of typing    
That means we have had 13000 ~Sun~rises ...
thank you for the tan    
Thank you for the many replies to my work that make up some of this impressive milestone.








[This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 04-01-2001).]

kcsgrandma
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4 posted 2001-04-01 09:34 AM


Congratulations on 13,000! Wow! And what a lovely little poem to celebrate this big accomplishment!  

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Kethry
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5 posted 2001-04-01 09:43 AM


Sunryu suits you, happy 13.000. May the sun never set on you.
write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



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6 posted 2001-04-01 09:46 AM


My goodness, Karilea, seems like just yesterday you were hitting a mere 10,000!
Congratulations, my friend, on lucky 13!

Nan
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7 posted 2001-04-01 10:09 AM


Thirteen thousand rays
Of Sunshine upon our hearts
PiP's a brighter place



Honeybee
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8 posted 2001-04-01 11:23 AM



Wonderful senryu, congratulations on 13, 000 sweet sunshine kisses!  You brigthen all of our days! Love ya!  


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9 posted 2001-04-01 01:39 PM


may the light of you
always shine
on our hearts

and may our light from you
always shine
on the hearts
of a world
that craves the light

Congratulations my friend. . . beautiful words. . .

------------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Paula Finn
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missouri
10 posted 2001-04-02 01:25 AM


Thirteen thousand rays
To shine in these poets eyes
And rest in her heart

CONGRATULATIONS bright one...keep shining here upon us

VAS
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11 posted 2001-04-02 01:33 AM


That is amazing, Sunshine!!  And from what I've seen since I came here, much of that is encouraging feedback and wonderful support.  Congratulations!!!! 13,000 WOW!!!***



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12 posted 2001-04-02 03:19 AM


  ~*~  WOW! 13,000 CONGRATULTIONS!  ~*~  

Goodness girl that is one heck of a lot of finger tapping...and oh what a tune you have played since I landed on your planet!  Shine on dear Sunshine, as you do spread light with every single keystroke. Great senryu too!

Sudhir Iyer
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13 posted 2001-04-02 03:20 AM


13 wonderful posts from you...

WOOHOO...

Thanks for all the kind words you have written for me, and thank you for your writings...

Regards,
Sudhir
P.S. and this one was a most wonderful senryu itself...

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14 posted 2001-04-02 10:25 PM


I am so glad I got to share your no. 13000

You are still the Queen.  Go, you girl!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


Lone Wolf
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15 posted 2001-04-02 10:27 PM


Soft and romantic, just your style.  This is a perfect way to commemorate your 13,000th post!!!!  Congratulations, Sunshine!!!!!    

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Wilfred Yeats
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16 posted 2001-04-02 10:44 PM


I gave up any hope - of catching up long ago -
I gave up hope - of even matching the quality
so I'll ignore the incredible number (13K)
and just say what I planned for the senryu:
I love it - I simply love it - and I'm not surprised

Irish Rose
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17 posted 2001-04-03 06:10 AM


congratulations on faithfulnes to replies!!!!!!  WOW

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
18 posted 2001-04-03 11:05 AM


Thank you all very, very much....
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