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KokoStewartKoomoa
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Waikiki, Hawaii

0 posted 2001-04-01 03:17 AM




etched into my face
deep valleys; barren sorrow
cruel cuts; time passes
with bittersweet memories
carved into my weary mind

My new webpage: http://www.koko-stewart-koomoa.cityslide.com/contents/contents.cfm/190111



Passion,imagination and intellect
running together... Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko

[This message has been edited by KokoStewartKoomoa (edited 04-01-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-04-01 04:23 AM


Lovely Cheri!  I was first to sign your guest book I am so excited...your site is spectacular, good for your girl!
KokoStewartKoomoa
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2 posted 2001-04-01 08:13 AM


Smiles...not too bad for such a beginner as me..LOL I just did the webpage today. It is really an easy tutor to do one and perhaps many poets here may delight to do a page there too and post poems on it. It even has a message board and Ilove having a guest book I never had one before so that is a whole lot of fun. I am glad you were in it, GF!. thanks and hugs!


Aloha with warmest regards, Koko
Please Visit my new web-page http://www.koko-stewart-koomoa.cityslide.com/contents/contents.cfm/190111

[This message has been edited by KokoStewartKoomoa (edited 04-01-2001).]

Mother_Earth
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3 posted 2001-04-01 12:15 PM


Koko, didn't get to your web site, yet, but will. Your poem says much in so few words and again, you paint a picture for all to see.  ME
KokoStewartKoomoa
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4 posted 2001-04-01 01:18 PM


Hugs to Mother! Please do come visit. I am like a lil' kid with this page. LOL
thanks for the comment on my lonely lil' number here too.
hugs Koko http://www.koko-stewart-koomoa.cityslide.com/contents/contents.cfm/190111

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5 posted 2001-04-01 01:57 PM


KoKo~
Before I run off to visit your new 'baby' ...
I want to say that this Tanka is just a perfect painting
of the graphic you placed with it.
PERFECT !
Love n' hugs !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Mabel A. Dilley
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Seattle, WA, USA
6 posted 2001-04-01 06:06 PM


You be the master of Tanka. You go gurl!

"I am not now that which I have been."

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