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Temptress
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0 posted 2001-03-31 05:45 PM


Thank you...
11am call
Seriousness eminating from your voice
Concern
I'm sorry I worried you
But I needed you and you offered to call.
You've been there in it all
Quietly taking the back seat
While I persued what I thought would bring me love
For a longer term
In all the nights, my friend,
You patiently there.
On the other end offering hugs
For something I couldn't tell you about.
No questions
You just hoped I was okay.
So I thank you.
You've been there for so long now
And I've always treasured your friendship
The friendship that I must turn to now
And thank you
For listening
So today
I'm hanging on to that 11am call
And finally
Being able to fall asleep.

We're sorry..this heart has been d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d. Should you like to hold the line we'll be glad to reconnect you..

© Copyright 2001 Jennifer - All Rights Reserved
Just A Woman
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1 posted 2001-03-31 05:47 PM


Wonderful, Jennifer.  I found your title the clincher of it all.



"I can't remember if I'm the good twin or the evil one."

Temptress
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2 posted 2001-03-31 05:54 PM


Thank you..and thank you for calling me Jennifer..

We're sorry..this heart has been d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d. Should you like to hold the line we'll be glad to reconnect you..

Sunshine
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3 posted 2001-03-31 05:54 PM


See?  There ARE good guys in white hats....
Irish Rose
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4 posted 2001-03-31 08:03 PM


It's great to have a friend like that........cherish him!
Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2001-03-31 08:06 PM


It sounds like you have something very special there, and that you cherish it...this was beautiful.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

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6 posted 2001-03-31 08:08 PM


it's always good to have friends. . .  

excellent writing Jennifer. . . as has all of your writing been lately. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

tradewind
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7 posted 2001-03-31 08:12 PM


a very nice tribute to your friend...well done
suthern
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8 posted 2001-04-01 03:29 PM


What a beautiful tribute to a true friend...
Temptress
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9 posted 2001-04-01 05:05 PM


Yes..Thank you all. He is a wonderful friend. I have many wonderful friends though, and I wish I could write the same for all of them. One day, right? Love and hugs to you all for your responses.

We're sorry..this heart has been d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d. Should you like to hold the line we'll be glad to reconnect you..

Red-uni
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10 posted 2001-04-05 02:39 PM



It is so nice to have a friend like that.
Red  

wayoutwalt
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11 posted 2001-04-05 03:35 PM


cool story nice write o yuh
JamesMichael
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12 posted 2001-04-05 03:47 PM


Enjoyed reading your poem...James
Wilfred Yeats
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13 posted 2001-04-05 05:43 PM


Me and JFK - only thing in common - we wear no hats (I guess he wore one for inaugeration) - but hat - white or black - male or female - like everything else - one must look beneath the surface -how's that phrase go? "A good man is had to find..." or is it "A hard man is good to find..."?

It IS nice when 'you've got a friend' - well said Ms T

Cuddlez
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14 posted 2001-04-05 05:46 PM


hehehehe
cute

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

Brad Majors
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15 posted 2001-04-05 06:01 PM


This is a great piece. Awesome tribute by a great poetess  
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