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Temptress
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0 posted 2001-03-31 05:25 PM


Whispered moments
Like pastime breezes
Meet the eyes
Heartbreak seizes.
Don't pretend the pain for me,
Love never had a claim to me.
Never had the chance to love you
Really
So now, I, fool, make my next move.

We're sorry..this heart has been d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d. Should you like to hold the line we'll be glad to reconnect you..

© Copyright 2001 Jennifer - All Rights Reserved
Just A Woman
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1 posted 2001-03-31 05:40 PM


This piece speaks ATTITUDE!  



"I can't remember if I'm the good twin or the evil one."

Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-03-31 05:45 PM


Hey girl, great write, but you're not getting ready to move AGAIN....and I like the sign line....
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3 posted 2001-03-31 08:22 PM


ouch. . . but are you really the fool???

powerful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Temptress
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4 posted 2001-03-31 09:38 PM


Certainly, I am..

truth is..these days I don't care as much..

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