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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rewrite Free I stand upon a lonely beach, Where lonely waters lap and leach And pave the sands to even lie, Under a magic azure sky. I gaze in silence measuring far See sand and waters meet the stars And ride this phantom of a seem Into a fantasy of dream. I nullify my lonely dwell Silence the dismal of my hell I sooth the spirits of my sigh Within a magic azure sky. Sailing into an ecstasy Away from earthly agony. Thrown overboard the ennui, For just a moment to be free. It's here within my brood of crime I braille into the thermal clime And I am for a moment free And gone is all the ennui. I'm solace, shield, heart and core Where judge and judging is no more. I am the clouds on the run I and nature are as one. I am a cipher in the sun. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Sy, This poem is the epitome of freedom. I know I certainly would like to find the place where: "judge and judging is no more" That sums it all up in one line I think. Great work. Michael |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You have some particular words that you use with regularity. I for one, enjoy seeing them woven throughout.... Thank you for this....  |
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tradewind Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 101 |
to be free, if only for a moment... very well written piece |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Michael, A pat on the back from you has made my day. Thank you my friend. Sunshine, What you say is true I do have favorite words just like people. *L* Tradewind, I thank you much. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I nullify my lonely dwell Silence the dismal of my hell I sooth the spirits of my sigh Within a magic azure sky. Sailing into an ecstasy Away from earthly agony. Thrown overboard the ennui, For just a moment to be free. It's here within my brood of crime I braille into the thermal clime And I am for a moment free And gone is all the ennui. I'm solace, shield, heart and core Where judge and judging is no more. I am the clouds on the run I and nature are as one. I am a cipher in the sun. ============================= since I have yet to ever see a beach or ocean in person, I must live vicariously thru those that have... I am sure it is a lesson in humilty and respect for nature as well as a place to find inner peace as you speak of here in your rhyme divine. Next time you go for your walks of solace on a beach of understand... bring me back some sands of time   *ww* me  It's such a clever innocence with which you show myself to me |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, The sands of time are in your eyes And that to me is no suprise. Believe me sweet you are a part Just look again within your heart. Winkiewinkie Stinky |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
 I am there with you ... feel me take your hand minds entwined ... as we walk your beaches of understand We become one with the ocean ... baptized in your rhyme Let your wisdom wash over me ... together we'll touch infinite sands of time  *winkiewinkie* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Well there goes Randy again. He's just been impossible lately. Your pictures are gorgious and your poetry heart melting. I wish I would I wish I could Wish this wish a wish that should. But since I can't I rave and rant and send Randy for things I can't. Thank you love. Winkiewinkie |
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