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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-03-29 08:49 PM



How I long to feel your touch
in the early morning hour,
you fill me with your loving
teaching  me of love's power.

Reaching deep you touch my soul
as you slowly heal my heart.
The special way you make love;
a true gift of finest art.

You awaken my senses
with your touches and sweet kiss
When your  holding  me closely
your holding me in sweet bliss.

I can feel your passion burn
as you feed the flame of fire.
You tremble me with your thoughts
as you fill me with desire.

Within your soul I am lost
and this world does not exist;
within your arms I am found
and your love I can't resist.

Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal. *s*

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1 posted 2001-03-29 09:56 PM


beautiful...


Greeneyes~




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"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown



RMW
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2 posted 2001-03-29 11:33 PM


Gentle Spirit....I think that it was Barbara Streisand who sang..."Just a little lovin, early in the morning..." You sing it better.  Bob
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3 posted 2001-03-29 11:35 PM


One of my favorite words....well done....
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4 posted 2001-03-30 01:07 PM


wonderful GS. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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5 posted 2001-03-30 01:11 PM


*sighs* this is SOOOOOOOO romantic....
Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2001-03-31 09:17 AM


Thanks to everyone for taking the time to drop by and read, and for the kind words.  I wish I in turn had more time for replying to each of you.  Thanks and God Bless all...

Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal. *s*

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