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Cerenity
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0 posted 2001-03-29 02:15 PM



Meandering Through Heavens Realm


Spread spirits wings taking flight
To stars shining crystalline bright
Meandering through heavens realm
Catch a comet’s tail taking the helm
Steer your way through all desire
That heart possesses in it’s entire

With angels as heavenly host
Watching from observation post
Express your deepest flights of fancy
In blissful elation’s they shall happily
Bless your every care and notion
Making much merriment and commotion

Take your worries hang upon tilted star
Carefree and spirited dancing afar
Over earthly vessels residing there
Taking deep breaths of clean clear air
Not a care in the whole wide cosmos
As angels bowing giving praise and kudos  

Scatter comet dust hither and yon
Swing from crescent moon till upon
Scant light of the sun beginning to rise
Almost time your dreamy nights ride
Comes to its end and your child-like ways
You give up for turmoil of worldly haze

For back to the awful grind
Never a chance to unwind
Building life that will go no where
Punishing yourself and nobody cares
Knowing only relief from being overwhelmed
Is to meander through heavens realm


By, Cerenity





  




"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)


[This message has been edited by Cerenity (edited 03-29-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-03-29 04:45 PM


We all need respite... even if the only way we can find it is with mental meanderings. *S* This is beautiful.
Just A Woman
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2 posted 2001-03-29 05:21 PM


Cerenity, this is just beautiful.  Light and delicate with deep meaning.  

"Often the test of courage is not to die but to live"

~Vittorio Alferi~

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3 posted 2001-03-29 05:25 PM


Heaven is truely great to reverence & acceptance there an honour cherished surely. Lovely Poem.
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4 posted 2001-03-29 07:45 PM


Cerenity~
I treasure these thoughts~

'Not a care in the whole wide cosmos
As angels bowing giving praise and kudos'


What a lovely, lovely treat from your pen !
Thank you, angel.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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5 posted 2001-03-29 08:46 PM


I've meandered there many a time Cerenity. . .

wonderful. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2001-03-29 08:52 PM


Cerenity, this is beautiful, I especially liked this line

Take your worries hang upon tilted star.....

sigh.....if we could just hang them there for awhile and if we really got lucky they would fall off.  lol....Really, I loved this poem.  Gotta go into the library with this one.     

Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal. *s*

Cerenity
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7 posted 2001-03-29 09:50 PM


Hi Everyone,

Thank you so very much for your kind replys, I am having a very tough week and as with the poem I posted yesterday and this one I'm trying to mentally pick myself up off the floor, I needed your kind words, my world I'm really hating at the moment , again thank so much,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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