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What Eyes Can Not See
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What Eyes Can Not See |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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(Here) I stand As autumn leaves, begin To fall, thinking about The first time I saw your Smile, all the colors Of you come flooding Back to my me For a moment this world Is all I know, no longer Do I feel lost As I See the world through your Eyes, every part of me Believes you are standing There open arms with the music Playing as you dance This soul, you know I cannot Let go The shadows come again To stay, they hang Heavy in the air, One place of stillness Evident in these tears, I shout the words in my mind Words that I whisper in the night Words that are silent What eyes cannot see The heart feels 1999 *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 03-28-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
quote: *sigh*. . . this is excellent. . . such images. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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sans38 Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 117Westland, Michigan |
Beautiful! |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
very nice-- i just used the words-- springs flowers about to bloom-- (since it is spring here..lol)-- enjoyable reading..thanks Jamie |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Greeneyes - very nice - touching words and thoughts. BC |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lady, it has been awhile since I have been here...... I am glad I did not miss this. Beautiful as always hon. Take care doll, miss you. *s* Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal. *s* |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
What a great flow, you have here...I enjoyed the poem too..it's brilliant!! Nathan |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
This soul, you know I cannot Let go The shadows come again To stay, they hang Heavy in the air, One place of stillness Evident in these tears, I shout the words in my mind Words that I whisper in the night Words that are silent What eyes cannot see The heart feels =================================== and the stars hear your whispered devotion. and you will already know I felt every word of this ... and I thank you for the whispers it allows me to hear... and for the sheer beauty of this poems grace as well. peace and hugs GE oh you speak to me in riddles |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
this title fits - your imagery so perfectly - I saure hope you keep writing - for you can write my heart as easily as you write your own |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is wonderful |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Great writing. I think we've all been here at one time or another. You said it well.  LW All writing comes |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Greeneyes, Thank you for this. Such a pleasure to read. Michael Proust- |
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Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
Beautiful, enjoyed reading! AP |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
for all the replied, please forgive my not getting back to reply as I should, I have been ill with the flu and therefore spending the last couple of days in bed...my many heartfelt thanks for the sweet words....be well all....and lets hope you dont get the flu....  Lauren~ *** "Within you I lose myself |
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