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She's Such a Part of Me
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She's Such a Part of Me |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea 
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She's Such a Part of Me by Michael Such tenderness is hard to find Such truthfulness, such open mind Such beauty in the words I hear Such heartfelt words I hold so dear Her words to me are like a kiss I keep them close within my heart They light my day and give me bliss To me they're much like works of art I love this friend, is that so wrong? She makes my heart break out in song Her eyes, the color of the sea Her secrets trusted just to me She knows they're safe wherein they're kept The smiles she's known, the tears she's wept Fat drops of rain that lashed her face The snowdrops in a garden place Her words are treasure shared with me No eyes allowed to view the chest The gold she gives lets my heart rest But she alone does hold the key I will not share this gold she gives The smiles that lengthen everyday The words that fill my heart with play The beauty that within her lives I will not even share her name Or share her wondrous beauty be Our words are often much the same Because she's such a part of me Proust- |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This read like a sonnet and was so sincere. Kathleen |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
I sure she knows not to share the gold that she gives. I love she's such a part of me! LP From the heart - sincerity. Where you go I follow. |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
I have a friend that's just like this. Exactly. Excellent poem. passion is life. . . ~Diana |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
All that is golden, should always be kept with in a treasure chest....you have said this perfectly....lovely my friend...waiting for more....  Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
She is a hell of a lucky girl to have you as her friend. Hang on to her. Beautifull written Titia |
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elizabeth anne Member
since 2001-03-29
Posts 83 |
Very nice Michael...very beautiful... Elizabeth Anne |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Michael, What a beautiful poem! I sooo hugely enjoyed this! So sweet  TaraB |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
She sounds so wonderful, it is no wonder you would keep her all to yourself... a beautiful poem... a beautiful gift you have shared with us all... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Michael~ What a lovely meadow of thought. Such loving treasure should be kept forever. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You have such a loving soul, this was beautiful, and not only are you lucky, but she is one lucky girl too! ~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Beautifully done... lovely thoughts... Regards, Sudhir |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Everyone, Thank you so much for responding to this and for your kind comments. I do so appreciate you taking the time to read my poems. My best to you all. Michael Proust- |
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