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Fractured Self
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Fractured Self |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Many pieces of my fractured self Lie like leaves upon the ground And though I place my dreams on the shelf My hopes still keep hanging around It feels too real to realize That life has passed before my eyes The stifling, remorseless grip of life And the timeless mental test Only the sky which has no height Or what used to be my best It took a lifetime of resistance to see My best, again, will never be |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
An excellent write... but please never say never... Regards, Sudhir |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Wow, what a brilliant poem, this is very well written . Give yourself a pat on the back, I enjoyed reading this . L.of.L. Tommy . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Try not, do or do not, there is no try . |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
So many of us have days that we feel beaten down, perhaps this is just a Bluesday instead of simply being a Monday... but I concur, never say ...never... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"And though I place my dreams on the shelf My hopes still keep hanging around" I know this....  and here I go...echoing those before me....never say never SEA |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
you didn't break anything did you Kathleen Blake |
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