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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-05-14 09:24 AM


Warm Waters of Waikiki

She told me I didn't look very happy.
I told her I didn't want to be happy.
I wanted to be kissed.
Of course a kiss could change my disposition
if it was properly timed and placed
and imparted the right amount of interest.
This kiss would require a certain degree of sensuality
in order to spark a smile from me.
From that moment on my state of disposition
would not be in question.
It would be nothing but smooth sailing for me
on the warm waters of Waikiki.

Jameslee@May14,2001



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VAS
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since 2000-11-16
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1 posted 2001-05-14 09:26 AM


heh heh heh

this is a cute one...a sweet request for the affections of your sweetheart

enjoyed!

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2001-05-14 04:08 PM


Thank you VAS for reading and responding...James
Paula Finn
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3 posted 2001-05-15 01:48 AM


I MISS those lovely warm waters...and hey I'd give you a kiss babes...
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2001-05-15 02:47 PM


Yes Paula the warm waters are nice...I think I'm going to have time to enjoy a little before I go to work...take care sweet poet...James
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