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Friendships Starting Duet of bslicker and Paula Finn
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Friendships Starting Duet of bslicker and Paula Finn |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind 
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Duet of bslicker and Paula Finn With the first line done by Paula, second from Bernie and so forth. . . Friendships Starting . . Sometimes in my mind, i venture a dream, When two work together, they become a team. . You...the sunshine, glowing through the rain, Me.... bright clouds filtering out the pain. . Your strengths fill my weakness, your laughter fades my tears, And your care and your loving will get me thru my fears. . Take my hand, take my heart, leave our past behind, Because when the future becomes you, you’ll never know what you will find. . So dream with me....believing that we can have a love's sweet dance, Never knowing the song's steps of taking life's chance. . This friendship we have started needs room to grow, With the garden of seeds that we can now sow. . So lets nurture this beginning, give it a great start, Cause Friendships made and keep is like very fine art. Bernie Slicker and Paula Finn [This message has been edited by bslicker (edited 03-28-2001).] |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
"Your strengths fill my weakness, your laughter fades my tears, And your care and your loving will get me thru my fears." That is what true friendship is all about. You both did a wonderful job complimenting each others lines. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hey....I am so glad you are both partaking of the sunshine of a friendship....and may I add...may it burn ever bright.... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is really wonderful, you two did a great job!  SEA |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
inot2B, Thank you, it took us a couple days, it was harder then I thought it would be.. Sunshine, Thank you and yes new friendships i am finding, expecially here in passions. Sea, Thank you, we were wondering if we did alright with this. And now your comments Paula? Bernie Slicker |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Isn't it wonderful when a friendship is just beginning... but already means so much you can't imagine life without it? *S* This is great... Well done to you both! |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
suthern, thank you very much *S*. Sure Paula will have more to say tonight..lol Bernie a a day keeps the world 'gBernie Slicker |
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Katherine Chandler Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 280Florida, USA |
I really enjoyed this collaboration, Bernie, you and Paula did a great write together. KateBlessings Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
inot2B...thanks...Bernie is fun to write with...he has a great way of looking at things and I relly enjoy his friendship Karilea...its always wonderful to find the warmth of a new friend...and Im hoping there will be lots more poems between us...thanks Sea...thanks sweet lady...Bernie is great fun to write with suthern...you are right...some friends just seem to fill a space inside...one you maybe never even realized was empty til you found them... Kate...thank you...it was our first attempt together and hopefully not our last...Bernie is such a joy to be with and work with... And now for you my sweet friend...heres to new beginnings...and new friends...writing with you is so much fun...and I really am looking forward to our next one together...HUGS!!!! |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
To all that replied,,, THANK YOU VERY MUCH.... Between Paula and myself we both thank you,, and i give a special thanks to Paula for the 2 of us to have the chance to do this.. It was fun, and i hope maybe someday that we can do it again... I will say writing a deut in any sort is not easy, but Paula and i had did this in about 3 days time... Guess we should have made a challenge out of it... but then again this was a spear of the moment thing..... Thank you for reading and you response's they are most valued... For my work stated here and i hope to continue it here.. Bernie a a day keeps the world 'G.A special thanks to a special person that i can not name because of her actions and words, this is what cause this writing.... ty Bernie Slicker |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Kate, Now that i got that done with thank you for reading. Had a great time doing this.. It was fun... Bernie.. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Paula IS great fun to write with...and this is a delightful combo the two of you have come up with! I think I may crown Paula, "Queen of the Duet"! Applause! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Crown me will ya? Geez girlie...that tiara looks good with my jeans dont it? LOL...seriosly tho...Bernie is such fun to write with...he has a way with words thats just wonderful...not unlike you...thanks from both of us...although Im sure he will tell you himself |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
of course i will,,,,,, thanks serenity and thanks to all this was a very fun piece to do. I have never wrote anything with someone else.... so this was real fun Bernie a a day keeps the world 'gBernie Slicker |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Beautifully done, you two. Check your mails please. We're sorry..this heart has been d-i-s-c-o-n-n-e-c-t-e-d. Should you like to hold the line we'll be glad to reconnect you.. |
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forevernbluejeans Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 76 |
This was such an enticing piece...leading you thru the steps...and what fun it seemed to be writing together...you make a wonderful pair |
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