Open Poetry #13 |
One (You) |
PoeticaL Member
since 2001-03-31
Posts 50 |
what you and i know is a gift pleasure the knowing you can turn yourself inside back outright and only to still be held in the embrace of another’s eyes as beautiful despite the wrinkles or smudges against clean perfection i am a movement when stillness is societies rule it is you that I am sober to reality for just you that I am without vice for you are my muse my mentor my child learning my contemplated thoughts invented for your judgment is never discerning inside out upside down straight lines turned from doubts to smile you that i confess to you i follow through you i fall into when i need to ache you i seek when the belief that i can be pretty sought after loved and bought for no cost is impending you that my ink crys for longs for lusts for and belongs for you in simplicity you that has become one within me you are not the star that seeks the night to burn out in a fizzle you are a firefly breezing through my wind on a sigh but i realize now nothing can compare to the one (you) Brad, There is only one you. Thanks for always being there for me. No matter what "me" I am each day. No one will ever do for me what you have done. Much love, Kristy [This message has been edited by PoeticaL (edited 05-10-2001).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is so very sweet! Kathleen Blake |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
What a sweet thank you for your someone special... lovely! ~Tier |
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samantha4 Junior Member
since 2001-05-09
Posts 32Pennsylvania |
simply beautiful |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
This is beautiful!!! |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
definitely a keeper - a beautiful poem. For those who believed in me - |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I agree, it's a very beautiful, moving poem *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
This must feel so good. (hope he appreciates) Nicely done, PoeticaL. "you are a firefly breezing through my wind on a sigh" S Arthur |
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