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Sven
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0 posted 2001-05-08 01:05 PM


she knows the word

the word that
lights the flame
the word that
melts the heart
and heals it
from its pain

she knows the word

the word that
fans the flame
the word that
fills the heart
with passion
yet untamed

she knows the word

the word that
holds the flame
the word that
she holds close
the word that
is his name

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

© Copyright 2001 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-05-08 01:26 PM


Been waiting for this one...well worth the wait.  Bravo and thanks, Sven!
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2 posted 2001-05-08 04:50 PM


And what a good writer she is.  You captured her well, my friend.  A very nice tribute here.

Michael

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"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

walker
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3 posted 2001-05-08 05:25 PM


Sven- I cry for fifteen minutes after reading this.I cannot thank you enough for writing this piece of me. You describe me well, the word is his name.
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4 posted 2001-05-09 01:12 PM


A wonderful portrait of one of my new favorites.  Well done.

passion is life. . . ~Diana


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5 posted 2001-05-09 02:23 PM


this is a wonderful tribute Sven .....excellent penned as always.

((hugs))
Charisma

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6 posted 2001-05-09 06:10 PM


JLR, you're welcome. . . nice to see that you waited for it. . .  

Michael, thank you, I always try to capture the writer. . .  

PV, thank you. . .glad that you enjoyed. . .

Charisma, thank you as always for reading my friend. . .  

walker, I have noticed the flame that appears in your writing from the beginning. . . it's a flame so bright that it can only be your heart. . . thank you my friend for sharing your words with us. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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7 posted 2001-05-09 06:46 PM


As always you read and see between the lines. You know us all so well. Very good!
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