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Seduction?
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Seduction? |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Seduction? You are more delicious with each yielding layer; there is much I must learn, please, teach me how to taste you, to savor these moments of discovery, this deepening sweetness in the unveiling of all that you are, a complicated mix - yin, now yang; with a hint of intoxication you lull me into a dream, yet use your power to pound within my veins. It took so long to reach this point, but you are worth the effort, Tiramsu. © 2001 Corinne Bailey [This message has been edited by Corinne (edited 05-06-2001).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
all i can say is cool with a smile o yuh |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
you had me with the first two lines and never let me go...this is GOOD! |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
seduction in verse.... and you have written it here "little by little bit by bit little bit by little bit" and THAT's how they GETCHYA!!!! LOL..... whoops sorry.... paul simon... hehe... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ You just made me very hungry for that 'melt in your mouth' flavor~ Wonderfully playful menu ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
*giggles* Nice one, Cor!  I enjoyed the taste of this.  |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Hey, Walt, smilin' back at 'ya! 'Deer - glad to serve you something sweet! Thank you! Doreen - you are so right, thanks! Marge - now serving dessert! Thanks! Have to make this for my best friend's birthday - was hunting around for recipes when I got the hankering to turn it into a poem! Jenn - thank you, hon, glad you enjoyed! Corinne |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I'm ready to read a sequel, this is wonderful! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ Here is a link to a tried and true recipe - http://www.taronga.com/recipes/desserts-misc/tiramisu03.txt Enjoy ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
all for that taste Corinne. . . mmmmmmm. . .  I liked this one. . . excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 05-06-2001).] |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
I absoultely love it. Do we not all have yin and yang? LP Day in Day out...My love for you grows. |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
I once took a course in Chinese history from a professor who was a Communist. He made no mention of Tiramsu. Do they have that "over there"? If not, should someone spread the word? On the other hand.... Bob |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks, Kathleen! Had fun with this one. Marge - hey, thank you! This poem actually came out of trying to find a relatively easy recipe for my best friend's birthday - and there are a lot of recipes out there, most of them pretty complicated. Yours was perfecto! Thank you, Latin Passion! Bob, Tiramisu is actually an Italian dessert, not sure how it got its name! Thank you! Cor |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
you're 2 for 2 today = there's no ecology or environnment in this one - but it got to me all the same ~WG~ |
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