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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
As shadows ignored as they crawl aimlessly over walls or ceiling, I've been near Silent witness to pain filled eyes & deep sighs draping about your shoulders these days Like shadows my offered comfort shall only pass through you with cold fingers of nothingness leaving us both empty unfullfilled... Another day born I listen to your sighs & suffer in the dark ~Tier{R.T.} 3/00 [This message has been edited by Tiersdin (edited 05-04-2001).] |
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Coal Surrender Member
since 2001-04-01
Posts 84U.S. |
I enjoy the style of your writing, it has a true sense of passion, and heart about it. Lovely work, once again. Coal |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
May you soon step out of the shadows into the warmth of the light and be touched with tenderness, Tiersdin. Heartfelt and extremely well-written. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Tier, something tells me that you've been walking here for a long time. . . well written my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tiersdin~ I enjoy the way you project yourself into a piece~ 'Silent Witness' would make a GREAT title for this beauty. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
One' sadness touches everyone nearby. Joyce [This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (edited 05-05-2001).] |
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